Thursday, October 21, 2010
The fog rose around the old mansion....
There is something howling, and a creaking door. The air is damp and chills the bone. All of these sensory details set the scene for a scary experience in literature. Below, write the first three paragraphs of a story. Be sure to send the message that this will be a scary one, by offering sensory details that will make it clear that this is going to be bloody.
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daniel mesa
ReplyDelete*the door cracks open steps get louder and closer to me, my heart begins to beat faster and harder, "errrrrrrrr" i hear a noise coming from the room next to me. I begin to panic and shake.
devnate barbosa
*the door pears open a little, i see a dark shadow getting larger as if i was walking underneath a street light, I close my eyes and begin to pray, i feel someone gettn closer to me and pull on my hair I begin to scream as loud as I can hoping someone will hear me.
in the darkness i stand alone by myself, the tress rustiling in the cold october breeze no ones arond me and i being to think some one is watching me with vishious cat eyes that glow up green in the dark, i pick up the house phone no dail, i begin to panic and, the trees in the backgroungd make me believe that someone is outside waiting for me. the lights go out i scream, as i close my eyes the back door opens i walk towards it slowly as i begin to walk i hear someones footsteps behind me as i stop the was an extra step, someone was havely breathing on my neck i turn around slowly as i look down and notice a bloodly knife in his hand, i know somethign was going to happen to me.... EVAN
ReplyDeleteZachary Durant
ReplyDeleteThe cool brisk wind had shook the orange and red leafs on the trees. The moon had revield its self threw the thin clouds. A silhouette of something almost human like peered through the window of a dark house. A black cat had scurried its self past the human like shadow in the allyway. There was a feeling of unease and the smell of gasoline could be smelt all around the out side of the dark house. The almost demond like shadow was holding an empty gas tank. the snap of his fingers fire had appered at the tip of his index and middle fingers. Ignighting the fums from the gas that had drentched the house hold. In an instant the fire was raging and the red eyed demond had made his escape disapearing in to the fire.
Ty Kelleher
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wo indentical twins named N & M and N's Girlfriend R where playing aginst their friends in a friendly game of volleyball right on the beach. Where it was three on three both were fighting extremly hard to win they were about The Team of NRM was playing against ARM. A was about to hit the volleyball up as she felt a drop of rain on her hair. "It looks like it's about to rain let's head into the treehouse."
Both run to the treehouse as the rain starts pours and dark clouds covered up the peaceful blue sky. NRM went to one of the cabinets and grapped out a box of fine glass china and a huge box which was with full of asorted size bell all made out of 24 karrot gold.
ARM are sit down to listen to NRM to try to make a musical with bells and fine glasses. NRM starts playing ARe enjoys it till NRM start walking to the only exit of the treehouse they were oringally near the window but they went to the door and looked it and N & M keep whacking the H*** out of A & R M was standing all alone R from NRM whacked her with a glass
They thru the bodies down the window then each perosn drag one person to the shore of the water and let them float facedown into the ocean and they float off into the distant.
"That was our horror special for our broadcast thanks to our dummies who are floating into the ocean and A,R and M for their acting and letting us use thme in our skit." says R as she turns the camera off
june fourth 1987. maria deztira was born with a rare disease. her head was twenty sven pounds and had a diameter of three feet. Maria's mother died during childbirth.the head wasnt the only disturbing part of the disease. she had a non stop bleeding problem in her ears and her mouth had few teeth. it was a fright just to glance at the girl. maria was made fun of all her childhood. her name in highschool wasnt maria the teachers and her peers named her incest because of her horrable looking face. being called such a thing by everyone for such a long amount of time put alot of stress on maria. on december 26th 1992 maria had stabbed her gym teacher in the eye socket with a ball point pen. the teacher was blinded for life and maria was sent to another school. but the bullying didnt stop. By the time maria should have finished high school she had assaulted 5 stuidents and had began to plot a family members death. on september 28th 1998 maria dismembered a busdriver's face with a pocketknife because the driver had supposedly gave her a dirty look as she climbed on. Maria wasnt seen for another decade untill her face was shown on CNN for causeing the biggest mas murder in U.K history.
ReplyDeleteAnthony Perez
ReplyDeleteThunmp, Thump, Thump!
The door creeps open slowly and Janet Screams because she doesn't know what it is. It's like around 2 in the morning and she hears something funny trying to creep upstairs and the door keeps opening back and forth. So she's under her sheets and everybody is asleep. She wanted to call out her brothers name but she didnt know if something was going to happen if she does that.
Later on that night she got out of her bed and she quietly opens the door and goes downstairs with a flashlight to see what's going on. On the way out of the room, her door closes by itself so now she's really scared. She goes downstairs and she hears some whispers going on and she said quietly "Hello, is anybody there"?
Renée Fortin
ReplyDeleteIt was a dark, cold night. You could hear the howling of wolfs behind the haunted house on elm street. The grass and air were wet with dew and the chilling wind sent goosebumps through your whole body. There was sudden screams coming and going from the house on the corner and glass smashing all around. As you stood in front of its picket fence, you could see the silhouettes of ghosts passing by each window.
From outside it always smelled horrid, as if someone was burning something. There was always smoke coming out of the chimney although no one has seen a person go in or come out of the house in 50 years. It was a typical storybook looking haunted house. Bats lived in their overgrown trees and bushes in the front yard as did many homeless cats and dogs.
As the years went by the smells became worse and worse and you could not even see the house from the street anymore. People began to go missing and so did the pets in the neighborhood. But no matter how sunny and warm it was that day, if you walked pass the house on elm street it was always cold and dreary, and you knew exactly where you were.
ar
ReplyDeleteIts a dark, stormy night at an average farm town.No one is outside, all you hear is the strong currents of wind banging the barn doors.Everyone is locked indoors trying to sit out the tornado that is going to pass.The town is intoxixcating by the smell of buring wood and rusty nails.
The whole town was asleep it was late at night and then there was a loud sheirk. As loud as it was all one person heard it a boy named Paul. He is a very big rebel, he just got kicked out of his school for lying.
Hi my name is Aaron Navaro.
ReplyDeleteSmash!!!..... Thump, Thump, Thump!!!
It was a dark night at camp crystal lake. There had been rumors about a man named Mike who had been killing kids at night during the camp. A couple of boys and girls went for a walk in the woods at midnight. They brought their flash lights so they could see where they were going.
As they were walking around, suddenly all their flashlights died. So now they couldnt see where they were going or know how to get back to the cabin. As they were trying to find their way back to the cabin, they kept on hearing noises and thinking somone was behind them or that somone was following them.
Snap, Snap, Snap, Snap!!!!!!
All of the kids heard tree branches breaking now. They could hear it geting closer and closer. Now they were running as fast as they could. A boy fell in a hole and he was left for death. The others came back to the cabin and found everything broken and all their stuff thrown around.
All the kids left the cabin as fast as they could. As they came to the main entrence of camp crystal lake they saw the man mike with a knife in his hand. Now all the kids ran away and mike was chasing them all. Mike caught all of them as soon as they fell in the trap. He killed 2 boys and the girls ran away to the police station and told the police. So they told the police and the police said they didnt believe them. So girls tried to convince the police and that didnt work out. So the girls went home and they were having horrible nightmares.
When they both woke up the next morning and wen to school there was an annoucnmetn that 3 kids were killed at a camp late at night.
Amandalyn Tessier
ReplyDeleteMiddle of a graveyard next to ancient grave stones.Dark,creepy,foggy,misty, windy. Hoot, Hoot. Screech, screech, yellow eyes lurking from every corner. Breathing on your neck, feeling like someone or something is following you. Chills going up your back. Screams comming from everywhere, bats flying around.You see things that you can't tell if they're real or imaginary. Tress making creepy shadows, ghost howling from every direction,
As you get father into the grave yard you hear somone calling your name but everytime you answer, the voice seems to get closer and closer. You hear childrean laughing in a creepy way coming from the distance. They ask you if you want to play with them, then they appear right infront of your face,you scream and try to run away bu no matter how fast you fun they stay up to you. Then you stop dead in your tracks and hear a chainsaw going off from the distance, you panic but the more you panic the closer the chainsaw gets to you.
As the person with the chainsaw approahes you, you freak out and run as fast as you can. Everything got so quiet that you could hear a raindrop fall. The breeze gets more fierce, you think you lost the guy. Then out of nowhere he appears again but you run somewhere that leads you to a dead end. Your trapped, what should you do, you have 1,000 things racing through your head, your heart is racing, your frantic.
Samantha Harris october 21, 2010
ReplyDeleteits crepusclar outside,the wind is blowwing like a hurricanr is about to hit. the speed of the wind sways my hair back and forth.I taste the salt in the air.The mist down my back. i decided to go inside the old gray house.I walk in like a mouse in a hole
i smell must in the air,i see broken antigue glass shattered with old mold on it.oh no in the distance i hear a laugh in the next room as i get closer the laugh slowly echos away.
ouch, i look down i stepped on a doll with a broken head with a eye popped out. i picked up
sammer dresses like a girl
ReplyDeleteIt was a cold rainy night far and deep inside the woods. The trees swayed in the strong wind and whistled an ominous tune. The aroma emitting from the death in the air could shake even the strongest of humans to their core. A force dragged in any drifters deep into the forest of death towards the ominous large mansion sitting quaintly in the darkness.
ReplyDeleteThe fog that arose around the mansion was mystifyingly intriguing yet very subtle. The path drifting towards the mansion was carefully made of stone that shined brilliantly in the moonlight. Along the sides of the path it consisted of thousands of tombstones tightly packed together. The smell that was floating in the air was so full of death and pain it would make anyone want to be among the dead. The rain still pounding pelted the roof of the house consistently along with lightning in the distance.
The cold and wet drifters slowly climbed the old creaky stairs leading them onto the porch. The smell of the wet wood was somewhat comforting despite the other surroundings. One of the drifters found a loaded rifle sitting in front of the main entrance and had no problem picking it up. They slowly opened the front door of the mansion; suddenly, a loud screech came from inside and a dark figure started charging violently into the man with the gun. A loud BANG occurred and the dark figure fell and disappeared into thin air.
......Sammer Bequir
Joseph Leoard Yankee III
ReplyDeleteThe fog is so think i cant see my hands if i hold them out in front of my face. i can hear bushes moving all around me, they are getting closer i hold my breath so hopefully they cant hear me. i turn around i think i see dark movement and there it was i screamed as loud as i could waiting to see what happens..
It's dark now.
ReplyDeleteI'm walking home from my friends house. It's around 11:45pm. When the wind blows the hair on my arms stand up. It's completely silent in this town. Everyone is inside asleep, warm in thier beds. The only thing i hear is the squeeking of my shoes against the moist grass. I think to myself two more streets and ill be home, warm and protected from the chilly night. I pick up the pace as I get closer to home. I hear a car turn onto the street and slowly creep down the road towards me. As it gets closer to me it slows down. I start walking faster and faster and the car is right beside me. i stop suddenly and so does the car. The window slowly rolls down and I brace myself ready to run if anything happens.I step a few steps back as a man emerges from the dark car. He's smiling at me with kinda a distant look in his eyes like hes in another world. He askes for directions to route 95. I tell him the easist way. Then all of a sudden he grabs something from inside his car i can't see it's to dark. But as soon as i see what it is it is pointed at me. He tells me calmly to get into the car. instead i turn and run, he shoots...
Victoria Masse
bria choquette
ReplyDeleteI step out of my bed. The wind is mighty chilly. i hear the floor bords creeking. What can it be walking thro out my house? As i get closer to my door,a gust of winds whips me in the face like a ton of bricks. I put my ear on the door, its cold.I still hear creeking. It sounds as if someone is listing to me on the other side of my door. I put my hand on the door knob and begin to turn. im not to sure if i want to open the door so i stop, let go of the handle and take a step back. Curious to know what is in my house i grab my cane and knock on the door with it. two seconds after i put my ear to the door i hear to loud bangs onto my bed room door. it was so loud it shuck my insides, like a mom pissed at her kid.
What could it be. my knees are shaking as if i had no control. My heart is leeping out of my chest like a frog leaping for safety. Its starting to get colder. i can now see my breathe, in my own house. I scream at the top of my lungs. as i see the door fly open. what ever is in my house i deffinitly got very angry.
a black shadow of a man is walking closer and closer as u move farther and father away. He is wet and dragging his right foot behind him as if he had broken it. it looks to me like this may be the last day i see a thing. I backed up to far im in a corner of my room. no were else to run so i sink down in to the floor boreds. hoping he will go away. i close my eyes and prey. I feel a hand on my sholder i scream as i sit up in my bed... it was all a dream!
*i wake up in a dark room. my head is killing me. the only light i see is the moon light coming in from the borded window i look outside it so foggy outside im surpized i could see the bottom. im up on the third floor.
ReplyDelete*i hear someone come up the stairs i look around the room from the moon light i see a wooden door I go in. Its a closet its about 7.5 feet tall and from the door to the back wall its about 10 feet long all the way around.
*the door gets kicked off the hinges. who ever kicked the door down was now walking to the closet i take a few steps back and trip over something. i was too scared to noticed but now i smell a rotting body and now i see 3 rotting bodies i panic and run out the closet. The guy grabs my shirt pulls me back lifts me off the ground. i see and hear him pull out a meat clever. It was huge. he picks up his arm and swings it down.
*before the clever hits me i wake up gasping for breath. once i get my breath back i look around, its dark and i look outside and see the full moon. i said to myself it was just a dream.
.....Chris G.
ricky walker
ReplyDeletei cant see. I'm in a room. It's dark. somethings around. I can hear them i need to run but they're in the house. I'm under the bed the windows open. I'm going to run. Somethings getting closer. They're at the door its opening. I get out from under the bed. I run to the window. They're in the room. I'm half way out....
rick is soft
ReplyDeleteWalking home one chilly night of October, puffs of frosted breath would appear every time I exhaled. As I turned the corner, I seen a dark shadow quickly run by. It resembled a big man with a hunchback. All of a sudden, I heard trees shaking, leaves crunching, all ending with a loud thud. When this happened, I froze in terror. As I slowly examined my surroundings, I noticed a light flickering on and off in a nearby house. I started to quickly walk away, until I heard a yell for help. This made me nervous, so I attempted to sprint home.
ReplyDeleteI tripped on a curb, as I took the last street to get to my house. I could hear faint footsteps following me, but when I looked behind me, I saw nothing there. I ran as fast as I could to my house, only to find my door locked and no one home. I got kind of tense, and ran to the backyard to check if that door was unlocked. As I thought, it was locked and I had to find a window to climb in. I went to call my Mom but my phone was dead. I was started to freak out.
All I could do now, was sit and wait on my front porch. Jumping at every noise I heard, I decided I needed to find somewhere else to go. As I walked down the street, I could hear my name being called through the air.